I have decided to make a basic script but also include the narrative in the script, as there will not be much speech included in our opening, this way the rest of the group will understand what I mean in the script. I will also state how long some of the shots may be, as this is vital to the effect because it will give a clue to the audience as to what is about to happen. I will now write out my script and afterwards will show it to the rest of the group and see if they want to make any changes:
SCRIPT:
(2sec shot)- 3 men getting prepared for something, looking dodgy.Audience is left in uncertainty as to what.
(5sec shot)- Girl walks along a road at night, talking with her mum in a foreign language (subtitles are included in shot). The girls name is Shadei.
shadei: "Salam maman, "(mum speaks)" are residam ghorbunet, nigaran nabash enghadr. Dirooz saate 11 sobh residam Landan, mehdi omad dumbalam foroodgah.
(2sec shot)-men putting on gloves/shirts.
shadei: Na maman nigaran nabash pool daram. Alan dooste Mehdi mano davat karde restaraunt, daram miram sare kare mehdi ke ba ham berim restaraunt.
(2sec shot)- Men putting on balaclavas/masks/aprons.
shadei: man bayad beram maman, mobilam battery nadare, az restaraunt residam khone ba telephone khone behet zang mizanam".
(2sec shot)- one of the men is shown holding a tool (maybe he could tap the tool on his hand or stroke it, creating tension and a sense of fright).
(3sec shot)- Girl still walking down the road, girl looking slightly frightened, and looks behind her to see if anyone is following her.
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